umm... long story cut short, I wrote a ballad and need some unbiased feedback, please respond, I am looking for any negative points as well as positive. the soilders wife. No honey, there's no need to look back, Don't worry, if you think you're on the right track, I wont yell or slam the door, but if you need me I'll be on the kitchen floor. I wanted to call out, but...

hey everybody, I wanna ask you all a favour. In Ireland everybody was very happy that all the shooting and bombing was over of course, but now with all the money trouble and debt, its resorting back to what it used to be. People my age and even younger are borrowing guns and knives, and I would just like to ask you to pray that this will all stop and things can get on the road to peace again,...